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Beauty is the Beast MAG
Her skin, butter-cream by day, turns translucent by night.
Her hair, ebony black, shimmers like the night sky
But only to deceive those she encounters
Her lips, stained crimson from her victims
Eyes piercing blue, penetrating those who make contact with them
Her corpse, deemed immaculate by those she lures into her trap
She is the deceiver, the harlot of the hills
But cleverly disguised
The mark of the beast lies in her hands
© Anonymous
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TangledThoughts BRONZE said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 11:02 pm
overall the piece gives of a very twilight vibe, but a good one none the less, I enjoyed the emphasis you put on some of the lines, this may sound cheap but i would really appreciate if you would critique one of my pieces,
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91383/Dust/ and if not, hey who am i to force you thanks.
TeenInk.com/raw/Poetry/article/91383/Dust/ and if not, hey who am i to force you thanks.
AlligatorStar said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 4:04 pm
I like the poem it's good but yea it does sound like something from twilight i have a feeling you like that book/movie. But whatever I love it.
~a fellow poet~
~a fellow poet~
D.J. Sweet said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 4:10 am
I loved it! It's so deep and heartfelt! You've seriously got to write more poems and share them with us!
bubblez01234 SILVER said...
on Mar. 16 2009 at 1:46 am
This poem reminds me of Twilight. I love the title it totally drew me in.
KunoichiTemari BRONZE said...
on Mar. 15 2009 at 9:26 pm
I loved this! The mystery of it is so intense!
Ivonna Reda BRONZE said...
on Mar. 14 2009 at 11:29 pm
i love the title!
it totally drew me in.
love the descriptiveness!
it totally drew me in.
love the descriptiveness!
lackofcontrol said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 11:28 pm
it was kinda of sick and twisted but in a really great way!it was a very good piece of poetry and i encourage you to post more! i dig the name
Quinn Dorgan said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 6:00 pm
This is a good Poem. It sorta reminded me of the book twilight. It is very deep. Keep it up.
Fiascozz said...
on Mar. 13 2009 at 1:51 pm
ths poem was alright... the flow was off, vocab was sexxy... needs work
Pink_Butterfly said...
on Mar. 12 2009 at 11:50 pm
nice . :)
jcheung912 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 7 2009 at 6:12 am
this is good. it's so wow.
Leticia Cummings BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2009 at 11:53 pm
... no words can say what i think of this pome.... incredible is only one of thousands of words.
nothingbutme said...
on Mar. 5 2009 at 12:14 am
i really like it it does remind me sorta of twilight but its amazing keep writing
kissingdawn331 SILVER said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 6:58 pm
AS you already read...really reminds me of twilight sega...well that relates to a lot but its really good
goodgurlgonebad said...
on Mar. 3 2009 at 1:06 am
Dude i love this but....it really doesnt remind me of twilight and i have read all the books more than once but your a great writter......
russian_roulette21 said...
on Mar. 1 2009 at 3:51 am
thank you so much for your comments (:
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