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Drowning

September 28, 2011
By liviebug66 GOLD, McMurray, Pennsylvania
liviebug66 GOLD, McMurray, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the number of moments that take our breath away.


The flood gates have opened.
I am drowning in a sea of quandary.
I am grounded beneath the surface.

I am being dragged by the aggressive current.
I am fighting against it with everything I have, even though I know I will never win.
It pulls me to a place far from where I have begun, I place I thought I would never be.

Oh, what I would give to breath smoothly again, for oxygen to fill my lungs.
I am frightened as I begin to feel myself fade away, losing my senses.
I slowly lose consciousness, and vanish into the depths of the sea.



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on Oct. 14 2011 at 9:42 pm
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~<br /> ~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~<br /> ~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than<br /> a distant memory.~

This is a beautiful poem. It flows very naturally , and has something special to it. I loved it! Great work:)