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Alone
June 3, 2009
She stands there
in the center
She walks
by herself
She talks
to the four walls
She cries
all alone
© Michelle M., Plainview, NY
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It is such a short poem, yet so powerful. For me, personally, it was a very weird feeling when reading this - but in a good way. With just those 8 lines, I understood. I felt and understood exactly what your words were saying. And that, I feel like, is magical.
PoisonIvy22 SILVER said...
on Sep. 27 2022 at 11:20 am
Stunning. I love how it is straight to the point!
the_black_rose_ GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2022 at 11:54 am
I love poems that are short but still so powerful and beautiful. Well done 👍
capricorn2007 SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2022 at 4:47 pm
For starters, it is a great poem, but if you want to make it better make sure it has more detail, on how she is feeling. But other than that this is amazing.
WhyWouldIKnow SILVER said...
on Feb. 20 2022 at 3:58 pm
@AntonioB915 poetry isn't about the length, it's about the meaning and I just felt more from this than a 300 page book I just finished reading. I rest my case
poetstears GOLD said...
on Nov. 16 2021 at 5:52 am
So much in those few lines! Amazin!
Crazywolfiegirl2 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 23 2021 at 3:19 pm
I love this, you made it so emotionally deep in only a few words
12376-astravo SILVER said...
on Mar. 11 2021 at 1:22 pm
I loved this. It is so deep. And the length does not matter, it is the words that count. You did an amazing job on this I loved it. This is pure gold. The picture you provided also goes very well with your poem. Don't listen to any negative people, your poem was awesome.
AntonioB915 said...
on Aug. 1 2020 at 2:09 am
Why so short, did you not think of anything else, like I mean you have a good meaning, don’t get me wrong, but there’s no way this is the whole thing, is this like... a snippet?
MahendraSingh said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:29 pm
this poem is very deep and has plethora of meanings
MahendraSingh said...
on Dec. 19 2019 at 2:26 pm
This poem is very deep but very meaningful
zoella said...
on May. 19 2019 at 7:39 am
So relatable. Love this poem a lot
isabellapopa BRONZE said...
on Mar. 6 2019 at 7:47 pm
so short and so powerful. i love this poem!
K1dby said...
on Feb. 25 2019 at 5:24 pm
Short and sweet! Love this, emotionally attaching with few words! :D
lydiagerges BRONZE said...
on Feb. 7 2019 at 7:54 pm
very few words with what so much interpretation can be mad. beautiful. xoxo
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