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The Message

January 8, 2013
By appledude22 BRONZE, Fort Mill, South Carolina
appledude22 BRONZE, Fort Mill, South Carolina
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There was a man named Paul,
One day he received a phone call.
He answered the phone
and was told to come home.
His mother had taken a bad fall.


The author's comments:
I am writing about a man, who receives a phone call saying to come on home because his mother has been hurt.

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on Jan. 16 2013 at 6:47 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Ah, extra cred. got it.

on Jan. 16 2013 at 2:23 pm
Rolledthestone SILVER, Nowhere, Other
8 articles 0 photos 108 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You hypocrite, first take the plank out of your own eye, and then you will see clearly to remove the speck from your brother’s eye." (Matthew 7:5) and "All the poeple who supported slavery were free, all the people who support abortion live..."

Ha, nice author comment, I think I got that though. Different type of poem. Very simple...if that's what you were going for...?