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A Shadows Fury

December 6, 2017
By CrimsonRIven SILVER, Owingsville, Kentucky
CrimsonRIven SILVER, Owingsville, Kentucky
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One can not compare their power to the fury of the shadows, but shadows may say their fury is greater than any other.

Only when the planets aline 

and the sun bestows it's rays of light

on this planet shall the shadows only reatreat

back to their cores, to lurk

and wait to spread insanity once again.

Yet once this moment of beauty is gone,

the shadows fury spreads as a wildfire devouring a forest,

corrupting what ever they touch.

An infestation that can't be so easily removed,

if not all washed clean. When antagonized 

this infestation will spring back into life devouring,

corrupting the host. A shadows fury puts it's host into their

own world of wonderous, uncontrolable choas, so great

the host so corrupted can't resist.


The author's comments:

I made this piece due to the ways I feel at times of hatred and anger.

One can not simply stop their horrible feellings inside, for another to arise.

Yet i do as i can to make all around me happy, to not let my insanity linger and grow upon them.


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Ducklover said...
on Dec. 15 2017 at 9:35 am
This is wonderful! I think you should just make sure you change the "it's" to "its". This shouldn't have an apostrophe in this context.
You have "it's" as in "it is", but you want (as far as I can see) "its" as a possessive.
Other than that, great piece! Very thought-provoking.