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Picture Street MAG
February 25, 2009
Time will reveal everything I want to know now.
I wish time was just the name of a street.
I’d drive a black car up and down time.
I’d be happy.
© Raine E., New York, NY
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hi,randomperson. GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 2:00 am
It tis' wonderful
bamboom212 said...
on Nov. 2 2009 at 3:01 pm
I get it and it's kOoL. It's short and to the point, but really good. ^_^
likelionsdo said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:27 pm
This is wonderful. I especially like that you said black car; it adds so much more to this poem. I can't stop thinking about it.
Lonleydandy said...
on Jun. 27 2009 at 2:23 am
This is one of the few poems I can actually relate to. If time were a street, I would keep going down, and up to see how my life would work out. This was great.
Jamie S said...
on Jun. 23 2009 at 8:20 pm
The poem “Picture Street†by Beau W. caught my eye. I like that it’s short because I often forget the beginning of a poem or story by the time I get to the end.
I like the idea of time as a street that you can drive up and down. This poem intrigued me – the idea of being able to travel in time. I would fix my mistakes, relive my happy memories, get to know those I had brushed off or forgotten, and many other things.
I really admire that although this poem is short, it is still a great poem. Whenever we have poetry assignments, I write and write because it never seems quite complete. It ÂÂalways seems childish and unfinished.
I like the idea of time as a street that you can drive up and down. This poem intrigued me – the idea of being able to travel in time. I would fix my mistakes, relive my happy memories, get to know those I had brushed off or forgotten, and many other things.
I really admire that although this poem is short, it is still a great poem. Whenever we have poetry assignments, I write and write because it never seems quite complete. It ÂÂalways seems childish and unfinished.
richardswifey SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:30 pm
it has lots of meaning in it i loved this one
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2009 at 6:32 pm
Its mellow and meaningful, I loved it.
Courtney.Firestone BRONZE said...
on May. 9 2009 at 10:19 pm
If time were a street, I'm pretty sure it would be a highway that we cruise down at 120 km/h. Where does the time go? Hmmm...
Anyways, very nice writing! As the cliche goes, short and sweet! :)
Anyways, very nice writing! As the cliche goes, short and sweet! :)
firstsnowfalls DIAMOND said...
on May. 6 2009 at 8:09 pm
simple yet powerful...great job. i have trouble expressing so much in so little words.
GoldenGirl PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 28 2009 at 1:33 am
very interesting. Short poems make you think about the words more. good symbolism.
shingarevdaniel SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2009 at 11:25 pm
small poem but strong
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supergrrrl_4808 SILVER said...
on Apr. 19 2009 at 1:58 am
that was amazing. i love how insightful you are. short and sweet.
Pamela Pozos BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2009 at 5:34 am
Sometimes short writings like these are the ones that mean the most
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