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October 28, 2013
By buttercup102903 BRONZE, Bellevue, Ohio
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when his smile lights up
the sun shines bright
when his smile goes away
the sun doesn't shine
if he keeps his smile always
the sun will shine forever

© Jennae P., Kennewick, WA

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ImmortalRose GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2014 at 1:35 pm
ImmortalRose GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
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Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding.<br /> Khalil Gibran

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Simple and short yet amazing!
Alycia. BRONZE said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 7:44 pm
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&ldquo;Our lives are not our own. We are bound to others, past and present, and by each crime and every kindness, we birth our future.&rdquo; -- David Mitchell, Cloud Atlas

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Very simple, yet it conveys the message in a powerful manner. Nicely done! 
ShannonLaDieu SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2014 at 12:59 pm
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The best part of beauty is that no picture can express- Loren blake Chosen House of Night serise<br /> mee-uf-ow!- Nala(Zoey&#039;s Cat) House of night Books<br /> since when has public making-out become a turn-on for you?- Zoey Redbird

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Its good overall. But maybe switch forever and shine.