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Acting

July 14, 2013
By Ashes_ashes PLATINUM, Jblm, Washington
Ashes_ashes PLATINUM, Jblm, Washington
25 articles 8 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you need to do. If you feel like screaming scream, if you feel like crying cry... -My dear Christopher


I hate having to act.
I wear a fake smile,
And a happy attitude.
I act like nothing is wrong
On the outside, but
On the inside-
Everything is falling apart.
I'm losing myself
I'm losing my mind,
And nobody is here-
To tell me I am fine.



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poet's mom said...
on Apr. 10 2014 at 3:02 pm
Her sign is  Fran333

poet's mom said...
on Apr. 10 2014 at 3:00 pm
Congratulations on an incredibly powerful and well articulated poem!  It cuts to the core! Do you know you are not along in thinking this ?  My daughter Francesca Biondi Morra and others are writing on expressing this emotion for your generation...you may want to support each other online.

on Aug. 12 2013 at 3:28 am
Ashes_ashes PLATINUM, Jblm, Washington
25 articles 8 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Do what you need to do. If you feel like screaming scream, if you feel like crying cry... -My dear Christopher

Thank you I am glad you really liked my poem. I was feeling like I have lost myself when I wrote this

KylieV SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2013 at 11:16 pm
KylieV SILVER, Goose Creek, South Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I really liked this poem because it almost seems like a war going on in the mind of this person. The imagery is established well: "Everything is falling apart. I'm losing myself..." It really shows the person's true battle with themselves.