Haha, just made smile, really.

Yeah... figured that something like that wouldnt be on TI. But still Its good to know the reader's impression. I probably set you to lauhing out of your chair!

Haha, not really :) Thaks for feed back

Aww! thaks!!

I love this poem! It is so intense and full of emotions and i liked how you used the cap letters for some words. I just really love it. Keep writing more i loke your style :)

Very beautiful, but also somewhat mysterious. What is it? And who is are the ones who pull the speaker away? The cynic in me sees the phrases "Go to paradise/ No more hurt/ But then they appear/Beautiful/Mystical/Luminous" and thinks of a drugged-out dream, that it was a siringe. If that were true, this is one of the most haunting things Ive read all month. What weird phantasmic creatures took her mind away...? What desperation must she have been in to be driven to this. It gives me chills to think of it... but the optimist in me is rather conflicted. It see the final lines "You are Their Beautiful Darkness/They are your Mystical Chaos" and can help but have a little hope. Perhaps, what ever harmful thing it was (for surely the IT was harmful, even if it was only an object of "his" memory) was not lost and forgotton in artificial bliss and taken by imaginary creatures, but taken by the very friends she stared out with before she was able to stand alone and realize how sad she was. Perhaps this person was merely cheered by her friend, friends who accept her and she finds beautiful because they are as dismal and lonely as she is. Haha, some weird hope, eh?

This is beautiful! (If a little repetitive at times). I love your imagery, great job xD