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Whispers

May 10, 2013
By maggieisbatty BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
maggieisbatty BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Good golly I'm upset


You feel it in your ear
Her breath
It’s much louder than
you expected and you
Jolt
backwards.
The bursts of air
tickle your neck
and a
chill
runs up and down
your spine.
You listen to her
gossip and giggle
at the lies.
You know she lies
but you don’t care.
It’s funny
There are some truths
but they aren’t funny.
You wonder
If you are laughing
at her gossip
or at the constant
flow
of air
that makes your neck
hairs stand

on end.
You shiver.
Not because
You are cold,
but because you

love her.
She is your
Best
Friend.
She is sharing her secrets
with you in the most

Personal
the most

Silent
the most
Intimate
the most

Exclusive
way she can.
She whispers.


The author's comments:
I was inspired by poems that make your body react to what you read. Whispers make the hairs on your neck stand on end and my goal is to make the hairs on the back of the reader's neck stand on end as well.

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bj44890 BRONZE said...
on May. 22 2013 at 10:44 am
bj44890 BRONZE, Willard, Ohio
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if love is lost then im what am i i am nothing but if love is there i am found and this would be the proof of your love

becca i love your work u do   

on May. 15 2013 at 6:37 pm
beccalynn1663 GOLD, West Milford, New Jersey
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Let your smile change the world. Don't let the world change your smile.

you are really talented!