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Chocolate Factory
April 26, 2013
My amazing bedroom
Filled with all my treasured memories
Chamber of which I dwell in
The place I go to at the end of every day
Not that small
Nor that big
Dark brown walls surround me
Cozy like a mothers hug
Always being cleaned
They say it’s a mess
They say it’s a jungle of clothes
But to me it’s wonderful
They say it’s unattractive
Dirty, displeasing, terrible
But never come to think of how I feel
I love my room
It’s perfect in every way
The chocolate factory
© Hannah O., La Jolla, CA
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This article has 2 comments.
GleekGamer PLATINUM said...
on May. 12 2013 at 4:39 pm
I agree with your statement that there needs to be more description, but I love the analogy between two great places, two safe havens.
OlveraJorge1 said...
on May. 12 2013 at 3:20 pm
Good topic but be more descriptive about the room. I can create hundre of brown walled rooms in my head. MORE DEATAIL!
