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Inspiration

March 22, 2013
By ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
11 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People don't always put up walls to keep other people out, sometimes they put up walls to see who's strong enough to break them down


Floating,
Falling,
Sinking,
Fading,
Always and forever waiting,
Hoping,
Wishing,
Wanting,
Dreaming,
Try and figure out the meaning,
Darkness,
Fear,
Crying,
Screaming,
Forever an abyssful feeling.



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witchwallow said...
on Dec. 18 2014 at 12:05 pm
witchwallow, Los Gatos, California
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I got tugged in to the words as I read, like I was spiraling into the very soul of the piece. Captures the truth, and was inspiring for my own work. Beautiful.

on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:33 am
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;For you, a thousand times over.&#039; - Hassan, The Kite Runner<br /> <br /> A professional writer is an amateur who didn&#039;t quit.

Hey rose... This was good... Inspirations are hard to get. Lol so I go out there and find it but when I'm feeling a bit lazy, I feel somewhat like this.. Desperate for an inspiration :)

on Apr. 18 2013 at 12:22 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You&#039;re on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who&#039;ll decide where to go...&rdquo; <br /> ― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You&#039;ll Go!

I like the irony of the title with the direction of the mood. The words keep instigating falling when inspiring insinuates rising. It's a very good idea. I like how it played out as well.

on Apr. 13 2013 at 5:33 pm
Nagini95 BRONZE, Lahore, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039;If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way&#039;&#039;<br /> (Will Rogers)

This is very good!
I find your writing style similar to mine and that intrigues me a great deal! :)