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Cream Soda

January 23, 2013
By kal.bel SILVER, Boyne City, Michigan
kal.bel SILVER, Boyne City, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to be unique, and diffrent, and shine in your own way." ~Lady Gaga


I wish I lived back in the older days
When ice cream shops had bars and stool
Where kids hung out and deemed it "cool"
I wish they served old orange sicle bars
Or orange cream sodas


The author's comments:
Addicted to Orange Cream Soda (:

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kal.bel SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 10:42 am
kal.bel SILVER, Boyne City, Michigan
7 articles 1 photo 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have to be unique, and diffrent, and shine in your own way." ~Lady Gaga

Thank you tons(:

on Feb. 2 2013 at 7:04 pm
Lightmountain BRONZE, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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on the contrary, i like the end.

on Feb. 2 2013 at 4:45 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

You have a really interesting idea, but I think you need to add a "payoff" moment at the end. While I read this, I thought that there was going to be this big, fantastic ending to tie it up, but there wasn't one. That will help you a lot!