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Follow Me

December 13, 2012
By Anonymous

Roses are red violets are blue, forget the B.S. I'm going to be real with you.

I'm not hood, I'm not skinny, I'm not good, I'm not pretty . I am one thing and its only for you. I'll do anything to be with you. My love burns like fire, melting away your pain. You make me shine brighter than the moon light, the light that petrifies darkness. Let the moonlight be our road. Follow it and you will find me. If you follow me you'll see that I am the moon. You are my sun, for without the sun there cannot be a moon. The stars are our children, they dance at the sight of you. Happy, joyful to see you. In the sky together forever. If you follow me we will be wonderous,



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on Dec. 18 2012 at 10:07 pm
1stclasspoetrylover GOLD, Highland Village, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Do not dwell in the past, do not dream of the future, concentrate the mind on the present moment.<br /> by Buddha

Such imense imagery. I love the vivid astronimcal metaphors in the poem. Not easy to bring astronomy into poetry but this is extremely well done.

on Dec. 18 2012 at 12:10 pm
Horus-Lupercal PLATINUM, Bartlesville, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
I reject your reality, and substitute my own. (Adam Savage)

it's always a good tool to start out with rhyme and then stray from it. This piece was intesnse and flavorful, I loved it. I could aslo relate to it, always the sign of fine work