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(1) New Message

July 5, 2012
By MikaylaT BRONZE, Exeter, New Hampshire
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MikaylaT BRONZE, Exeter, New Hampshire
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In that moment, I swear we were infinite.

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The truth changes everything.

Your bittersweet lies,
Got her right where you wanted her.
But then
Your facade

Cracked.

You're a villain.
A selfish
Loathsome
Demon.

How many now?
10? 20? 30?
How many girls have you seen?
Stealing innocence
From the grasps of the innocent.

All for
(1) New Message.

© Emily M., Milford, CT

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MikaylaT BRONZE said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 7:30 pm
MikaylaT BRONZE, Exeter, New Hampshire
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Great idea(: I wrote this kind of as a spur of the moment thing, haha. Thank you for the feedback!
CupcakeAddictAnonymous SILVER said...
on Jul. 5 2012 at 7:27 pm
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I really like this but you could make the 2nd to last stanza a little longer. I'm not saying that there is anything wrong, I happen to love it. Explains my situation to a tee.