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It's You

May 26, 2012
By mjunior SILVER, Hacienda Heights, California
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mjunior SILVER, Hacienda Heights, California
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Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. 5 It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. 6 Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. 7 It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. <br /> <br /> 8 Love never fails. But where there are prophecies, they will cease; where there are tongues, they will be stilled; where there is knowledge, it will pass away.

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Hey you, yeah you, want to know a secret....shh... I

think I like you.....no....I do like you, but do you like me?

Well how would you know if I liked you when I haven't told you. But

you don't know who you is. You could be the boy I go to school with or

you could be the boy I saw at the store last Wednesday. You could be anybody.

But you are not just anybody. You are all I can think about,

you are all I want to talk about. I haven't seen you but I long to,

I haven't met you in person but I plan to. I'll let you figure out who

you is and just maybe you do know that its you who I like.

And believe me you'll know it for you'll feel it inside.

© Emily B., Houston, TX

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This poem is for a special someone who I like very much..........
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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2012 at 2:31 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

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Well i liked your poem and your tilte. I like the parital second person view. I like your detials and simpilicity. Only suggestion is your lines are a little bit spaced out to much. Other that i liked it.
JackieH PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 7 2012 at 8:18 pm
JackieH PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Don&#039;t break character, you&#039;ve got a lot of heart. ~ The Killers

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Your grammer's a little messed up but good nonetheless.