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The way you make me feel

April 28, 2012
By Holley SILVER, Ocean Springs, Mississippi
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If you think you are no longer loved, you're wrong... I will love you forever and ever until the day I die.

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You bring me up
when I am down
You make it so I never frown
When we talk nothing else matters
Without you my heart will shatter

© Louisa L., Pleasanton, CA

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XoxBriannaxoX said...
on May. 12 2012 at 11:28 am
XoxBriannaxoX, Jamison, Pennsylvania
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Nice Short Poem! I like it, maybe make more, but longer? Is this about a certain person? Lucky you, if it is:) Ever thought of writing songs? This would be a catchy chorus:D