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Daddy's Womb MAG

April 23, 2008
By Anonymous

i asked my father if i could swim,
and he said that i would drown.
The Sea would imprison me – he said
if my feet had left the ground.

So i walked out to the water,
and cried out – how ’bout now!
He said, a little bit further, Son,
and then you’ll leave the ground.

i stepped on sand then stone,
from hollow ground to sturdy.
The sky was at my level as I
gazed at the birdie.

The Sea brought me a new idea,
the urge to flee to the high.

i asked my Father if i could fly,
and he said, sure, Son – go try.

i jumped as high as i could.
Still, i landed on the ground.
i saw my Father pull on a chain,
then i knew that i was bound.



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on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:10 pm
WhereAmIWithinMyself BRONZE, Reading, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I know myself... but that is all!&quot; -F. Scott Fitzgerald in &quot;This Side of Paradise&quot;<br /> &quot;A poet looks at the world the way a man looks at a woman.&quot; -Wallace Stevens

A great bildungsroman poem.

Also, if you want to help me answer the question "Where am I within myself - in my heart, my soul, or my mind?", check out my poetry pleasee. :)


Banana said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 12:04 pm
Kachow!!!!

on Mar. 30 2012 at 4:29 pm
that waz a good poem.thanks it helps me out with my listening skills with my daddy xd

on Mar. 30 2012 at 12:25 pm
Krystie1250 BRONZE, Neosho, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
To accomplish great things, we must dream as well as act. <br /> Anatole France (1844 - 1924)<br /> Creativity is the residue of wasted time.<br /> Einstien<br /> You can&#039;t fly when something is holding you down.<br /> (I&#039;m not sure who said this first)

Wow.  That was really good.  Thank you for writing, and please keep doing so.

on Mar. 30 2012 at 12:21 pm
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
&#039;&#039; there is nothing to fear but fear its self&#039;&#039;

i love it!this is so beautiful, it choked me up, check out my own work please!

leshaye said...
on Mar. 29 2012 at 2:42 pm
leshaye, Indana, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
DONT JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER

this is nice

on Mar. 28 2012 at 5:32 am
Nooneknowsme BRONZE, Ambathenna, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Don`t dream your life and live your dream!! ;)

Thank you for your comment!!

This is really fantastic!! 

Keep on reading my works, a new one which is waiting for approval is on the way!

Im sure you`ll like it


on Mar. 27 2012 at 7:54 am
Luv2WriteNO1 BRONZE, Covington, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
Shoot for the moon even if you miss you&#039;ll land among the stars

This is amazing!

MissShah GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2012 at 12:09 am
MissShah GOLD, Nawabshah, Other
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Favorite Quote:
`Instead of thinking about how to win, think how u lost last time. u will definitely win`- Adolf Hitler.

oh really lovely! soo touchy... keep it up!=]

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 7:28 pm
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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lol. Yeah. Unfortunately, TeenInk doesn't offer a space for middle-named folk like myself.

NickyJ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 24 2012 at 12:26 pm
NickyJ BRONZE, Hyde Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;In three words I can sum up everything I&#039;ve learned about life: it goes on.&rdquo; ~Robert Frost

Carl H. = c.c.haynes? Didn't see that coming.

Surprise Surprise.


on Mar. 23 2012 at 12:00 pm
ImJustAGuy BRONZE, Oakland, California
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ok thanks so much

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:54 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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Thank you! ;P

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:50 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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I will.                                

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:49 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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lol                               

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:49 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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=)                                          

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:42 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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Me neither. Just know that I'm humbled by it. "Bedtime story"...lol...that's funny. I think I will write a series of odd and horrifying bedtime story themed poems now. Thanks for the inspiration. I've been reading Aesop's Fables & the Grimm's lately anyway.

Carl


c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:37 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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Huh?                        

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:36 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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Here I am.                     

c.c.haynes said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 11:33 am
c.c.haynes, Staten Island, New York
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Huh?