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Do I Take My Life
August 30, 2011
Do I take my life
And lose all the things I love
Do I keep my life
and think nothing of
Do I stay or do I go
Follow my heart, so confused
I chose my path, life and death
my love, I chose you
© Molly L., Phoenix, AZ
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This article has 9 comments.
ethan_bane_hope GOLD said...
on Nov. 18 2011 at 7:20 pm
i like it! it short and its full of your thoughts and emotions! at first it doesnt sound like it fits together but when you read the whole thing it makes perfect sence
TevoRocks said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 9:41 pm
WOW that was amazing i love it it was the most amzaing poem ever ROCK ON!!!!!!!!!
EatPrayLove BRONZE said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 8:07 pm
awwww i'm sorry you feel or felt this way or if you know someone who feels or felt like this! I think that it's pretty amazing you can come out and write deep feelings like this just know that someone loves you even if it feels like no one does and remember something good comes out of something bad even if it takes a while you can learn from the bad experiences! Life is not easy but it's ok because it's not supposed to be if you want a good life. I hope that makes sense to you:)
clumsyteardropper SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 7:43 pm
wow... i'm so sorry to hear that. i felt the same way too... i pray things start looking up for you.
aubreylax said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 12:58 pm
this is really short. the emotion doesn't appear to be that deep because there is so little being said. You seem like you don't even have this emotion yourself. I feel like you watched someone else feel this and theen tried to write about it, which is worth doing. But just try to elaborate more and put in a little more emotion! :)
lala(: said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 9:51 am
LOVE IT!! keep writing((:
