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held within

August 8, 2011
By expressions4443 BRONZE, Kent, Ohio
expressions4443 BRONZE, Kent, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"you can say what you want about me, but i am who i am, thats something you could never be"


My soul not dark but bright
bright as the sun
not dark as the midnight sky
souls consist
of glee or sorrow
not a happy medium
I say
its all from pretend
people holding back there fears
pains
sorrows
memories
which now I never can pretend again!

The author's comments:
I wrote this poem to show that people hide inside to not show their true feelings.

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on Jul. 18 2012 at 2:08 pm
freespirit94 GOLD, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Sometimes people are beautiful. Not in their looks. Not in what they say. Just in what they are.&quot;<br /> -Marcus Zusak

This isn't the greatest poem in the world, and it isn't "dressed up" or "fancy" like you have something to prove. It's original, and rough, and full of emotion, which I love. Great job - fantastic poem in my opinion :)