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Mr. Valentine

April 18, 2011
By AlliHolmes BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
AlliHolmes BRONZE, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"What if he's your Prince Charming, but you're not his Cinderella?"


Dear Mr. Valentine
I see you smile for her
I see you laugh and cry
but you don't know that when you're gone
I fall inside and die

Mr. Valentine
These words are mine
I wrote you a letter
hoping I could make
this fate something better

Mr. Valentine
I cried for you last night
I cried but the pain won't quit
I don't know how
to deal with this s***

Mr. Valentine
I can't tell you why
but I love you more each day
if I could change my mind
I would have yesterday

Mr. Valentine
I loved you
and I cannot help it anymore
as you have torn me apart
there's nothing left of me anymore


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on May. 16 2011 at 7:43 am
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love, like you can&#039;t get hurt<br /> Dance, like no one&#039;s watching<br /> Live, like there&#039;s no tomorrow

soooo.... how is "Mr. Valentine"!?!??!?! lol hahhahaha

on May. 15 2011 at 2:33 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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this is really good! i liked the rhyming-- it always makes a poem better.

 


on May. 14 2011 at 4:35 pm
FatesMistake13, Springerville, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Most people die of a sort of creeping common sense, and discover when it is too late that the only things one never regrets are one&#039;s mistakes.&quot; Oscar Wilde <br /> <br /> &quot;The books that the world calls immoral are books that show the world its own shame.&quot;

I really love it! :) it relaid a lot of emotion and feelings and rolled along smoothly