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I love you anyway

February 10, 2011
By consumedbygrace247 BRONZE, Durham, North Carolina
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"Change the way people think, and things will never be the same." -Steve Biko (South African civil rights martyr)

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Love is not as simple as a
candy filled heart shaped box
unless my soul was the candy apple
to your eye
that fit
into a heart shaped box
and even then it's not simple
it's simply elegant
Love that elegantly dances on your lips, as they smile
Love that elegantly sings in your heart, as it pumps blood
through you

And your love?
Your soul?
Hides behind the candy filled
heart shaped boxes
because you don't know how to express
the one emotion that is misunderstood
as express-less
and that is OK

Let my love speak volumes
be the canary to sing
our song
you know the one...
the one that can't fit
into a heart shaped box

© Yisrawayl G., Philadelphia, PA

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consumedbygrace247 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 12:03 pm
consumedbygrace247 BRONZE, Durham, North Carolina
4 articles 2 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Change the way people think, and things will never be the same.&quot; -Steve Biko (South African civil rights martyr)

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Thanks! I love repetition, and sure :)
Blue4indigo PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 22 2011 at 11:15 am
Blue4indigo PLATINUM, Sturbridge, Connecticut
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This is lovely, great job. I especially like the repetition of the heart-shaped box!

Could you please read some of my work, rate, and tell me what you think?