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Forever Girl

January 9, 2011
By Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM, Bragg Creek, Other
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Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM, Bragg Creek, Other
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Thats when he said; ‘forever girl’
I smiled one last time
They told me to run as fast as I could
The denial became a blur
Along with the tears
I should have listened to them
I wish I had, I wish I would

The thing about endings
They’re really beginnings
I wish I’d known that from the start
Before I submitted to lending
My heart out again, and again
A new beginning was deserved
I reassured my broken heart

Thats when he said forever girl
Always for you dear

She believed him

He lied

© Rebecca Y., Los Angeles, CA

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I wrote this piece at about 2am in the morning instead of studying for a final. Typical =)
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Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 7:52 pm
Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM, Bragg Creek, Other
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dance in thunderstroms

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awee thank you so much! =) 
Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 7:52 pm
Live.Life.Fast PLATINUM, Bragg Creek, Other
26 articles 2 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
dance in thunderstroms

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Thank you =) yah how many times has that been said to a girl haha
lilmartz PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 3:38 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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I like the way you wrote this! It had a very nice flow to it. Definitely one of the best 2 AM poems I've read. Nice work :)
beautifulgirl557 said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 1:18 pm
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i think the word choice of this poem is good. i really love that you quoted the words most guys would use toward a girl. keep on writing.
freetobe8080 SILVER said...
on Feb. 10 2011 at 8:51 am
freetobe8080 SILVER, Powhatan, Virginia
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 i really like this poem... :)