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True Hate

January 19, 2011
By Adeline_Jacobs GOLD, Camp Lejeune, North Carolina
Adeline_Jacobs GOLD, Camp Lejeune, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"The trade of authorship is a violent, and indestructible obsession." (George Sand) "Even rest should be creative, so that time doesn't flow around us, but through us. This is art." (Anna Kamienska)


You fell long ago,
Your light distinguished
Your glory gone.
Thrown down into the
burning dark.
Not once did you
Ask for mercy
or Forgiveness.
Your first flight in
this green and blue
Dimension,
A strange world
You did look down upon,
Now you see with
Exiled eyes
and Clarity.
Men hunting,
Fighting and hurting,
Women deceiving,
hating, crying
Children starving,
playing, running.
You think to yourself,
"I can become one of
Them.
A Man."
You fell again,
But into a beautiful
Soul.
Shimmering hair,
Gleaming smile,
and Bright eyes.
But then she died,
In your life so
fleetingly.
You fell into the
Darkness once again.
Anger bubbled up inside
You.
You rose into the skay
Yelling out to the Lord,
Begging for her to come back.
Cursing God in all his glory.
You sank down,
back into the Abyss.
You watch and
Wait.
Wondering, pondering,
What love the world
Above is full of.
You see with
Jealousy in your
Soul,
Young Love grow
and Die together.
A kind of innocence
You were robbed of.
Then once you did
Decide,
to go above.
You lingered with
Mortals
Drawn to love,
Like moth is to
Flame.
Created doubt and
Turmoil,
Cheating and
Hate.
Women knew you
Loved them,
But you were
Repulsed.
Tricked them
and Scorned them.
You created
True Hate.

The author's comments:
This piece is similar to "To Be Together" but with a very different ending.

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