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Random Thoughts

October 11, 2010
By Anna-Akua SILVER, Taunton, Massachusetts
Anna-Akua SILVER, Taunton, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
But the funny thing about it is I ain&#039;t even start yet<br /> I&#039;m only using my mind I ain&#039;t even use my heart yet<br /> I just evolved I ain&#039;t speaking theoretically <br /> -Keys &quot;Dear Dummy&quot;


Walks a hidden valley
Sees an empty thought
Reveals a lonely life.
Makes a bright smile
Laughs a joyful sound
Reveals a sweetened life.
Runs with chains held tight
Screams of terror at night
Reveals a frightened life.
Looks without seeing
Laughs without joy
Yells without reason
He reveals a simple thought.


The author's comments:
I wrote this last year during my 7th grade English. I was so bored, so I took out my pen and wrote something in my notebook. I hope it will bring out some thoughts of yours!

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on Sep. 22 2011 at 12:34 pm
carothesparrow GOLD, Lilburn, Georgia
15 articles 9 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
dont give up she will talk someday my friend made this quote she is really cool cause she understands about my sister<br /> it starts with ONE to make a differerence!!! i learned this quote at a leadership camp<br /> <br /> ohana means family no one gets left behind

thats really really good

on Jun. 21 2011 at 5:05 pm
Anna-Akua SILVER, Taunton, Massachusetts
9 articles 0 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
But the funny thing about it is I ain&#039;t even start yet<br /> I&#039;m only using my mind I ain&#039;t even use my heart yet<br /> I just evolved I ain&#039;t speaking theoretically <br /> -Keys &quot;Dear Dummy&quot;

You are so right! But i also had so much b.s. my mind, the boredom helped me to settle down and write:) thank you so much fo ur comment, pls comment more on my work (i will too)

on Jun. 14 2011 at 12:40 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Boredom instigates extreme creativity, as I always say :)

on Jun. 14 2011 at 12:39 pm
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM, Lothlorien, Utah
44 articles 16 photos 2206 comments

Favorite Quote:
Boredom instigates extreme creativity. <br /> ~Amoniel<br /> <br /> "Bowing gratefully to all of my subjects, 'thank you. Thank you. The pleasure is mine." Nah, I'm just kidding. We're all kings together.'" <br /> ~Thesilentraven

Beautiful! I love the shortness of the lines, their bare-bonedness.