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Stars and Shadows MAG

June 2, 2008
By Anonymous

Shallowing through sand I search for diamonds,
excusing the dark and undisappearing stains
for a few honest shadows,
and barely breathing
for the desired fear of being heard.
I am stuck in a time where
the only hope
is that maybe hope exists,
and maybe we’re not the foolish star wishers
we see in the mirror,
we see in the sadness of memory.
I once read that poetry is music of the soul,
but it’s a forgotten harmony,
a whispered blending of the melody,
echoing from every unspoken word,
melting from the things we never say,
although, from the very first day,
we knew things would be this way.



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on Jul. 7 2011 at 3:00 am
writergirl156 SILVER, Waxhaw, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't be afraid of death, be afraid of the unlived life."

"Why are you trying so hard to fit in, when you were born to stand out?"

i love this! your words so beautifully intertwined with meaning...

orgin said...
on Feb. 28 2011 at 5:22 pm
I LOVED IT.

on Feb. 25 2011 at 9:46 am
Sarah Butler BRONZE, Marshalltown, Iowa
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I liked this poem because it was very descriptive and detailed. I also agree with you when you said that poetry is like a fading melody; the simile was very effective.

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Jan. 16 2011 at 9:52 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

I never looked at it that way. But you are right. Poetry is a fading melody. I love the way you worded all of it.

on Jul. 20 2010 at 4:46 pm
AMAZING!! i kept on reading it over and over again! love it!!

on Apr. 1 2010 at 2:49 am

Wow. The terms you have used to intertwine your thoughts and musical views are truly, wow.

 


LinzyLove said...
on Feb. 13 2009 at 8:04 pm
Wow. You use a lot of musical term. I myself am a Violist

..:*Gabba*:. said...
on Feb. 4 2009 at 7:16 pm
hey...





awesome poem.! :D





i love it.!! <33