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August 16, 2010
By ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
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ForeverFaith PLATINUM, Dansville, New York
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"so this is how liberty dies, with a thunderous applause" -unknown

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Nowdays nobody says exactly what they mean
There is always a limerick, a ryme, a rittle to uncrack to find the hidden message.
Rappers use so many unnecisary words, just get to the point. We get it, therer are only so many ways you can say that girls are hott.
Are they stalling for time so they can make a get away before people find out who they really are?
Just say what you mean.

© Danielle C., Enumclaw, WA

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