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So it Should Be

July 22, 2010
By mmoran BRONZE, Lakehills, Texas
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mmoran BRONZE, Lakehills, Texas
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"What is a weed? A plant whose true virtues have not yet been discovered." -Ralph Waldo Emerson

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I rise to find a letter on my pillow,
Inside is surely a promise or obligation you plan to keep.
I read though the words careful not to peruse over anything.
The letter is promising, so far.
However, I know I am only looking for one thing.
I am not searching for a ‘sincerely’ or a friendly ‘with regards’.
No, I am searching for more,
And I am searching for love.
Word after word, my heart begins to beat faster.
My breathing becomes deeper, my eyes find their way to the closing of your fine letter.
Love, so it should be.

© Richard F., League City, TX

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mmoran BRONZE said...
on Sep. 1 2010 at 5:59 pm
mmoran BRONZE, Lakehills, Texas
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Thank you very much everyone, I truly appreciate the comments.
MKB17 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 27 2010 at 3:39 pm
MKB17 PLATINUM, Southampton, New Jersey
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This is a cute poem :) Nice job
meganwagner21 PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 25 2010 at 11:15 am
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love the last line
Thesilentraven PLATINUM said...
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This captured part of the very complex and wonderful feeling of love. Well done.