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Forever
June 29, 2010
Forever
That's what we promised
Forever friends
And always together we promised
to Lways have each others back
We let each other down and now we're sitting here looking distressed
When once Upon a time we always impressed
Forever
Thats the pledge we made
In crowd of confusion
Our friendship
No,
Our love died
Goodbye,
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Eternally17 SILVER said...
on Jul. 22 2010 at 4:07 pm
I really like the whole theme of the poem :)
However, the ending sounds a little incomplete, was it meant to be that way?
Well written, tho :)
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe my life would have been better if you had never intruded. Maybe thats just the way i cope with... cope with not having you." -By Me!!
Thanks,
and yes the ending was suspose to be incomplete to show its not really over. There is another parto this poem that completes and finishes it but its taken so long to get one acepted i would prefer to have them all get down before i sumbit any new work, two more befor all six are up and ill post the other half. =)