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June 22, 2010
By VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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i can't believe the words you said
baby, you kneeled on the concrete
where i kissed you for the first time
please the words want to say
that you will goin to ask me
what will complete my dreams
my prince charming, i love you
baby, please i hope you will
me to take your hand
me and you forever and always
baby, you are my world
and my prince
ohhhhhh i'm looking into your eyes
so blue like the ocean
as i held you before
looking at the sunset
laying on the rocks
glazing at the stars,babe
you pull my hands in yours
fingertips on my body
when your fingertips take my face
kis syou so sweetly like candy
you unwrap the ring
baby, you ask to be my man
for forever until the end
i said, I LOVE YOU
as simple as the three words
and 8 simple letters
to spend my life with you

© Nicole B., Newcastle, WA

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VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 6:50 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
41 articles 0 photos 71 comments

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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that's all you can do

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awww thank you, it means alot. n dont say dat, you got great writings. allrite, keep up ur work:) ill be reading
Hannahgee6 BRONZE said...
on Jul. 28 2010 at 2:38 pm
Hannahgee6 BRONZE, Greensburg, Kentucky
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therefore do not worry about tomorrow. for tomorrow will worry about itself. each day has enough trouble of its own.<br /> -jesus

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hey. you asked me to check out your work. and you are absolutley amazing. :) way better than mine. haha. keep writing!! :)

 

VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:02 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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thank you squishy squish
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 10:02 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awww thank you:)
Squishy-Squish SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 8:11 pm
Squishy-Squish SILVER, Port Richey, Florida
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&quot;You can hurt me with the truth, but don&#039;t comfort me with your lies.&quot;

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→Great way to express emotions. Good flow. Fits like a puzzle :)
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 12:57 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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you welcome huney anytime
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 7:29 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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\&quot;either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin<br /> <br /> \&quot;If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\&quot; <br /> <br /> \&quot;If music be the food of love, play on.\&quot;

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wow i really like how heartfelt and amazing this is!!! your telling a story whichi think is always cool in a poem-well not a story but a scene-but i still lke it:) also i love how you worded everything its very clever!!! Please check out and comment on some of my work when u get the chance!!:)
VickyLove92 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 3 2010 at 3:12 pm
VickyLove92 PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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once life gets harsh/hard, hold your head strong because that&#039;s all you can do

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awww thanks...i really meean it. it means a lot:)
bbygurl21 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 2 2010 at 5:21 pm
bbygurl21 PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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sticks n stones my brick my bones but words cant

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i love this poem so much you are an amezing writter keep it up