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Michael
February 19, 2010
If perfection took a human form,
I'm sure it would be his.
With lips like nitrous oxide,
leave me crazy when we kiss.
An embrace just like a freight train,
knock the breath right out of me
and keep me always wanting more,
his touch a neccesity.
And if the stars could melt down-
fall, graceful, from the skies-
made golden in the sunlight, those stars would be his eyes.
© Brandon W., Redwood City, CA
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meganiscooler GOLD said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 5:52 pm
thank you thank you thank you!
HappySappy SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 5:39 pm
wow when i read this one word came to mind: true love. the metaphors of this are FANTASTIC and the imagery is WOW! keep up the awesome work! im looking forward to reading more of your work!
meganiscooler GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2010 at 7:46 pm
thank you so much! I'll be sure to check out yours, too
wow, i've been looking on this website at the poems that come after mine and some of the ones that my friends wrote. and you know what? this is the best one i've heard yet. i'm giving this 5 stars and im thinking about adding it to my favs. it rhymed w/o sounding corny and i didn't think it was cliche, it described how you feel and i thought it was very clever. loved it!! keep writing and check out my poems too!!
