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Shrouded lies

February 2, 2010
By BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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the mist shrouds the truth
the air is thick with bold lies
shrouded in a foggy shade
impenetrable to the human eyes
unseen by any glass
unnotices by all it sorouunds
until its blown away by the wind

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BlueInk94 PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2010 at 8:00 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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thank you!
ktbug96 SILVER said...
on May. 13 2010 at 8:45 pm
ktbug96 SILVER, Jericho, New York
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Favorite Quote:
~Make a wish, it&#039;s up to you, find the strength inside, and watch your dreams come true, you don&#039;t need a shooting star, the magic&#039;s right there in your heart, close your eyes, believe, and make a wish~ (yes it&#039;s from a song :D)

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short and sweet. wow (:
BlueInk94 PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 3:33 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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thank u! that means a lot. i always had trouble with short poem!
ShernayB. DIAMOND said...
on May. 10 2010 at 11:24 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Short.

But with a bigger message.

Its brilliant.

You are an amazing writer.!

 

BlueInk94 PLATINUM said...
on May. 10 2010 at 8:32 am
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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Thank you so much! And yeah i always end up making typos. Arg!
EleanorRigby PLATINUM said...
on May. 9 2010 at 2:45 pm
EleanorRigby PLATINUM, New York City, New York
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&quot;The optomist proclaims we live in the best of worlds, and the pessimist fears this is true.&quot; - James Branch Cabell

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The imagery here is really magnificant. You have a few typos, and in some of your other pieces too, but that's not a problem. It's fixable. The idea behind this poem is great, good job
BlueInk94 PLATINUM said...
on May. 7 2010 at 6:30 pm
BlueInk94 PLATINUM, Valley Park, Missouri
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thanx! Its true...! lying is the new talking
Miseltoe GOLD said...
on May. 7 2010 at 5:01 pm
Miseltoe GOLD, Boneville, Georgia
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I like it. Lying is as comfatable as skin nowadays.