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November 15, 2009
By SuPeRfLyy! BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
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SuPeRfLyy! BRONZE, Moore, Oklahoma
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I mean worse than usual<br /> :)<br /> -ME

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Every night,
I open my doors
To see a
Palace.
Of awesomeness.
I can do anything,
Anything.
Anything.
I will not falter.
I cannot die.
This
Is where I rule.
Where I breathe.
Where I live.
Forever.
And ever.
And ever is always.
And ever I live
In my world.
Where I rule.

Through the dark
Till the light,
I make the wrong
Right.

So right.

The author's comments:
this is just about
living my life
when nobody is watching.
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Sarbear GOLD said...
on Apr. 2 2010 at 8:25 am
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this is so unique, and i love your choice of words. you definately got the message across. keep writing !Check out some of my work too :)
jwhit2003 said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 4:42 am
Very intense choice of words but to the point. It's nice to see poetry with a deep thought process. Keep on writing, you have a great talent.
Sunshine said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 7:47 am
Superflyy....I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem. It is very deep and yet it had a clear message. Keep writing!! This world needs your talent!! I give it 2 snaps up and a twist!!