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Darkening Depth

October 26, 2009
By jellyfish222 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
jellyfish222 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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is it not the darkness that can drown you through the floors
of the very foundation that has stabilzied your pitiful life

is it not the lust that has driven your soul into a creation
of someting you never believed to be your future

maybe you always knew the black dripplets would soon
build up beneth your lurid past

and maybe at the end of crisp, cold trail
you'll find revelation and compensation

and maybe you will realize that the past cannot
dictate the future coming

unless you lead yourself to believe so
the path you create is the path to the greater life

find yourself upon a path well known
you find yourself back into the depth
where the struggle to crawl out
is much greater than the struggle to crawl down



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on Nov. 10 2009 at 2:55 pm
AbbotRabbit GOLD, Abolana, District Of Columbia
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This poem has great flow and insight.<br /> I really enjoyed it.<br /> Lovely poem darling =]<br /> -Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-<br /> XxIll tell you Im an orphan after you meet myy familyXx

This poem has great flow and insight.

I really enjoyed it.

Lovely poem darling =]

-Please check out the works that I have posted on here it would be highly appreciated and I think you would greatly enjoy them, Thankk youz-

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