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Illusion

October 2, 2009
By gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
6 articles 12 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"


Did you press your lips against mine?
Did you catch me when i fell?
Did you embrace my uncertainty?
Because i am shaking.

Did you feel love for the first time?
Did you look me in the eyes?
Did you see my soul deep down inside?
Or were you just an illusion?


The author's comments:
love comes and goes so make memories and remember those who have come and gone in and out of your life

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gabigal SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 12:24 pm
gabigal SILVER, Conroe, Texas
6 articles 12 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"everything has beauty in it, you just have to see it"

thanks..i jus losst my love b/c i was uncertain of things and so he left...ha

on Nov. 8 2009 at 5:28 pm
alexisjo SILVER, Roanoke, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
fearless doesn't mean you're unafraid, it means you're terrified, but you jump anyway. <3

I loved this poem so much! I loved when you said,

Did you embrace my uncertainty?

Because i am shaking.

That was my favorite part (: