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Broken Forever

September 25, 2009
By Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love me or Hate me"......"Me Vs. The World and the World is Winning"......"When the going gets tough the tough get going".


The x-ray comes through,
Instead of bone it is organs,
Instead of black and white it is colored,
Lots of red,
Except one thing,
My heart is black,
My heart is black.

Black and broken,
They say that that is what is wrong,
Broken three times,
I want to sew it back together,
Sew it back together.

The doctor says I cannot,
That it would just get worse,
Which seems impossible to me,
But as I sit there,
I feel it break more.

I cannot stand to sit around anymore,
Doing nothing,
It just hurts more,
I have got to get out,
Of the house at least.

I finally leave and meet up with some friends,
There I meet him,
There I meet him,
He is great,
Cute, funny, considerate, and sensible.

As we talk I begin to feel better,
We start dating,
And I tell him what was wrong.

And I tell him what was wrong,
About my broken heart,
And what the doctor said,
Also that talking to him makes it feel better.

We go back to the doctor,
Every month,
It gets better,
But not much,
It still hurts,
It still hurts,
But it’s getting better.

Years pass,
I feel better and better,
He proposes,
I say yes.

We get married,
And decide to go back to the doctor,
The x-rays still show scars,
But it is red and beating,
It is red and beating.

I will be okay,
He knows it,
I know it,
And so does the doctor,
I will be okay,
I will be okay.

The author's comments:
I wrote this peice a while ago as I was trying to get over an old crush. I met someone in the process who helped me.

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on Oct. 27 2009 at 2:39 pm
Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love me or Hate me"......"Me Vs. The World and the World is Winning"......"When the going gets tough the tough get going".

Thank you...:)

on Oct. 27 2009 at 10:40 am
Warren_Uzumaki DIAMOND, Jim Thorpe, Pennsylvania
92 articles 28 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
they say the mind bends and twists to deal with the horrors of life... <br /> ...some times the mind bends so much it snaps in two. <br /> <br /> Love at first sight wastes less time

that's pretty good and true i know

exactly how you feel

on Oct. 26 2009 at 6:59 am
Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love me or Hate me&quot;......&quot;Me Vs. The World and the World is Winning&quot;......&quot;When the going gets tough the tough get going&quot;.

Thank you I will certainly try! I am glad you can relate to it!

on Oct. 25 2009 at 11:14 am
herdiary SILVER, Chandler, Arizona
7 articles 1 photo 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I just want to be wonderful.&quot; --Marilyn Monroe

I can relate to this so I love it. You're a good writer...keep writing.!

on Oct. 21 2009 at 2:33 pm
Mystery_Girl SILVER, Lake, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love me or Hate me&quot;......&quot;Me Vs. The World and the World is Winning&quot;......&quot;When the going gets tough the tough get going&quot;.

I am not sure who rated it but thank you for rating it five star.