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Rock, sea, and hear

March 14, 2022
By Laislima0 BRONZE, Midvale, Utah
Laislima0 BRONZE, Midvale, Utah
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

My feet are over a rock

I’m standing on my past

Scream louder!

Feel it.

My feet are over a rock.

Two and a thousand more directions.

The sea is staring at me,

I’m looking at it in the eye,

But I can’t hear it.

Scream louder!

It is getting overwhelming

I’m trying, I’m trying

Now, my feet are under the water

I am here. 

I can feel it

I am hearing it

I’m screaming louder 

And my feet are under the water

And over a rock.


The author's comments:

I created this piece with lines from poems I wrote in my english class. It is the junction of poems I felt satisfied and relivied while writing, so it is a poem that makes me feel relieved and renewed in a certain way.


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on Mar. 27 2022 at 2:37 am
Laislima0 BRONZE, Midvale, Utah
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments
@Afra thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!!

Afra ELITE said...
on Mar. 21 2022 at 1:29 am
Afra ELITE, Kandy, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"A writer must never be short of ideas."<br /> -Gabriel Agreste- (Fictional character- Miraculous)

Fantastically written!!! Good work getting this on editor's choice...⭐⭐⭐