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Sunset

November 17, 2021
By BCosKnow221 PLATINUM, Orlando, Florida
BCosKnow221 PLATINUM, Orlando, Florida
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"You know," she told me,

"Sometimes there are good days. 

Days where I watch the sun start

to set and sob because 

I'm so happy to be alive in that moment."

I think we could all use a sunset, some days. 

The striking, paralyzing overwhelm 

of appreciation so strong

that it becomes nigh impossible to hold back tears.

It's the little things.


The author's comments:

A quote from a friend. Thank you,  Ally.


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Afra ELITE said...
on Nov. 21 2021 at 12:07 pm
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Lydiaq ELITE said...
on Nov. 21 2021 at 9:16 am
Lydiaq ELITE, Somonauk, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
The universe must be a teenage girl. So much darkness, so many stars.<br /> --me

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