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Porcelain Doll

January 4, 2019
By Casandrad2163 BRONZE, Jamaica, New York
Casandrad2163 BRONZE, Jamaica, New York
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You were like a child
Reckless & clumsy
My heart a porcelain doll on the top shelf
You reached for it with your grubby fingers
Jumping and grabbing to get it
But in your reckless fit,
You dropped it.
Shattering it everywhere,
Breaking the doll into little pieces
Like you did with my heart.


The author's comments:

2018 was a troubling year for me. A series of unfortunate events happened, changing not only my life but myself as well. Despite how bad 2018 was, I've never written such amazing pieces before. This is one of the many pieces I've written, Porcelain Doll.


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Scar BRONZE said...
on Jan. 17 2019 at 6:36 pm
Scar BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
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This is so beautiful.

Dillonbpd said...
on Jan. 13 2019 at 4:02 pm
Dillonbpd, Jamaica, New York
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I love this !! ❤️ Just don’t ever let your experiences shape you negatively!

on Jan. 13 2019 at 3:48 pm
XxContritionxX BRONZE, ?, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Oh shut up. Every time it rains, it stops raining. Every time you hurt, you heal. After darkness, there is always light & you get reminded of this every morning. Nothing lasts forever, the good or the bad. So you might as well smile while you're here." - pleasefindthis, Return to Green.

despite its shortness, it has a deep meaning. lovely.

angied23 said...
on Jan. 13 2019 at 8:43 am
angied23, Jamaica, New York
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Loved this piece. I could really relate to it. It’s deep and shows just how hard the year was for you. Please continue writing I know you will be very successful.

KingCapri said...
on Jan. 13 2019 at 7:40 am
KingCapri, Jamaica, New York
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I loved this short peice please continue on your journey to success.