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Bad Habit

March 21, 2015
By Celestexoxo, Hamilton, Other
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This was a short story piece for my writing class!!! 

Getting everything handed to her causes Nicolette to miss out on the actual struggles throughtout her classmates. When her car breaks down, and none other than high schools bad boy, Julien come to her resucse Nicolette learns that to some, you have to work for what you want. Soon she finds herself thrown into his cruel world and wanting more of what he provides, even if she ends up loosing herself in the process. 

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emerald walton said...
on Apr. 13 2015 at 1:26 am
emerald walton, Vero Beach, Florida
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I'll definitely read it
emerald said...
on Apr. 13 2015 at 1:25 am
I'll definitely read it
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 6:23 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Chapter 4- I'm still getting a bit of emotional whiplash. I wish the emotions weren't so quick to change. Other than that, you've got a good plot. You just have to fix up the details.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 6:21 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Chapter 3- this is moving rather quickly to me. I think slowing down the pace would make this more realistic. Just a few hours prior to this chapter, she very much disliked Julien, and now she's in love with him. Of course, there are also the typical grammar errors here.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 6:18 am
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Chapter 2- I think this might be getting a little bit cliche in the sense that the main character gets into trouble with someone trying to sexually harass them and the love interest saves them.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 5:53 am
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Chapter 1- I think the reader needs a better image of Julien. All we know about him is that he's male, but we don't know anything else about his- or Nicolette's- appearance. Also, I think we could use more detail in general as opposed to dialogue.
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 6 2015 at 5:46 am
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Just from the prologue, my recommendation is to edit a bit more to fix the flow and grammatical errors. However, this does sound interesting.
HammadWaseem said...
on Apr. 4 2015 at 1:22 pm
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Thats great! Good job! @Celestexoxo will you check and comment on mine? :) TeenInk.com/video/dancing/114206/The-Unbeatable-Breakdancer
Celestexoxo said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 7:01 pm
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Thank you! I think I will begin to make this a novel instead of a short story
emerald walton said...
on Apr. 3 2015 at 5:01 pm
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I actually like your book and I think you should have continued