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First Kiss

September 5, 2009
By Anonymous

“Come closer” he says. I walk across the front porch moving lingeringly threw the summer night air. I stop to breathe it in. It fills me with an energy that crackles through my body jump-starting my heart. It beats loudly. I feel it in me as it throws itself against my chest. I feel its swelling pulse in my wrists and fingertips. I feel it in the bottom of my stomach.
I lean against the railing facing him but I can’t look at him.
“Closer.” His voice is deep and hoarse. I feel him scrutinizing me. He slides two fingers into a belt loop on either side of my hips and pulls me to him. I laugh and finally look up. He was smiling broadly down at me. He continues staring. Not wanting to be the first to look away but finding the tension unbearable i cannot help but to look down yet again. He unclasps a hand from behind my waist and lifts it to my face. As he did so it shook.

“I guess I’m more nervous than I thought I’d be” he says in that same low voice. He tilts my face towards his. His stare remains unbroken but the smile has vanished and a new intensity has overwhelmed his face. Then slowly, he kisses me.

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. said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 8:14 pm
That's really good, but I wish it was longer
StarryRoss GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2012 at 1:41 am
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moving lingeringly threw? Good, but that first part just throws off the cadence; proofread.
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on Feb. 29 2012 at 9:35 am
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very good and romantic!
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Wow! That was awesome!!!!! I loved it keep writing!!!!!
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I second that !!!! ;)
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I loved it! It was really good for a short article. Please write more! I would love to read more of your writings! :) By the way, i haven't had my first kiss yet either........ :p
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haha i felt that way but i just had my first kiss and can say its worth waiting for!
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Deep, I love this(:
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I thought this was really good!(:
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thank you :)
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Love the picture. cute shoes

 

Tonite BRONZE said...
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i did not get my first kiss yet

 

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I love this!!! It is so sweet!!! And don't worry pageturner, you will get your first kiss eventually!!!:):):);)
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Nice story, although it feels like it should be longer. Is it me or does it seem like almost everybody but me has had a first kiss?
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Love it! Makes me miss my ex.
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I really, really loved it. It was just... perfect. Gorgeous and simple in a burst of awkward love. 

It was absolutely fantastic. 

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This story is great. I love how the characters are very intense. Short and sweet..
Unexpected_Beauty said...
on Jun. 10 2011 at 7:36 pm

 

Myfirst kiss went a little like this.... He told me to lay dwn on the bench,my head in his lap... Then he  told me to close my eyes I did as he said and I felt his lips on mine -Zacc I love you :D

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