Oh Thy Beloved

March 29, 2017

By BRONZE, Paragould , Arkansas

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Oh how tis goddess of beauty loves thee

Whith hair like silk and eyes of midday blue

Admiring you brings me wonderful glee

The love I have for you will stick like glue

Your radiant smile shines like the bright night

A voice like this must be an enchantress

Every word you say has some sort of light

A day without you has a lot of stress

Oh my beloved thou are fantastic

With love such as yours I shall never roam

You make every day enthusiastic

When with you I feel as if I'm at home

Thou hath made life a sweet experience

The joy caused by thee is greatly immense

The author's comments:

This poem is about my girlfriend. She is my absolute everything and couldnt make it without her.

This article has 4 comments.

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on Mar. 30 2017 at 10:11 pm

Dude this a great sonnet! You have a great talent, your sonnet is better than mine. I love your sonnet!

on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:52 pm

I love it!! The poem is amazing, don't ever stop writing!!! You are very talented!!!

BRONZE said...

on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:45 pm

This is awesome Nick. I absolutely love it, and it makes me happy you have such a loving relationship. This poem is fantastic; love love love it.

on Mar. 30 2017 at 9:32 pm

This is really good. The way the words fit perfectly together in the sonnet and the way you express your love for your girlfriend. I love it