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True Feelings Sonnet

April 29, 2015
By GalaxyFalcon13 BRONZE, Raeford, North Carolina
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There's no hope for people who have never seen Star Wars.

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You truly do make my heart flutter, 

especially when you catch me staring and you stare back.

Whenever we talk I try not to stutter, 

but you would look handsome even in a sack.

 

I really try my best to impress you, 

I try to dress nice, 

I try a new hair-do,

I even add extra spice.

 

But it seems to me that you don't see

the effort I put in.

So if you would please listen to my plea.

I hope it doesn't make your head spin.

 

No matter how hard I try I can't get you out of my head.

So would you please be the butter to my bread? 

© Daniel H., Durham, NC

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on May. 6 2015 at 5:30 pm
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Awww. Such an adorable sonnet. So many emotions and gentle feelings.