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Curiousity

February 17, 2015
By joebro SILVER, Compton, California
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joebro SILVER, Compton, California
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Dreams are like a box of chocolates, if you hold on and think about them for to long it will all start to melt away.

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sseeing you walk down the hallway with a look so serious

you're so beautiful to me and that made me a little curious

but the though of talking to you made me feel so delirious

so as you walked to me i let you walk by

without even looking at you or even saying hi

i watched as you walked by with my head hanging low

my mind created thoughts, but my words wouldnt flow

now you're gone away and i feel so ashame

i swore the next time i saw you i was gone atleast let oyu know my name

© Emily M., Milford, CT

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SarahSylvan GOLD said...
on Jul. 24 2015 at 11:06 am
SarahSylvan GOLD, Needham, Massachusetts
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&quot;Never Give Up&quot;

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I think the use of rhyming words actually takes away from the poem it's self. I do think the idea about being so curious about someone is really strong. I'd also go back and go over your grammar, because while I did know what the words you spelled wrong meant, it took me out of the poem itself.
Izzy777 SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2015 at 10:19 am
Izzy777 SILVER, Tampa, Florida
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&quot;I always wonder why birds stay in one place when they can fly anywhere around the world. But then I ask myself the same question.&quot;

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This is so good, I love this. Makes me happy.
RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 8:04 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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Oh I'm so sorry! Hope some of the poems you wrote in it come back to mind. You're welcome.:) any time you want a comment I would love to give it a shot.
joebro SILVER said...
on Feb. 19 2015 at 11:28 am
joebro SILVER, Compton, California
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thank you so much I will try my best to stay up with poems like this but I recently just lost my poetry book so now I have to start all over again
RealRiter GOLD said...
on Feb. 18 2015 at 2:30 pm
RealRiter GOLD, Astoria, Oregon
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This is an AMAZING poem. Love it! This is better than most poems I`ve ever seen. Great work!:)