This is an okay writing. I believe it has much more potential, than displayed here. The idea behind the poem, and is obviously displayed throughout the pooem, is one that is commonly written, and sadly i didn't see the seperation from this poem, among others alikew it that I have read. Nevertheless, it was worth reading. You have redundancies in the first two lines, "First start, first day, first class, new school, 9th grade, It is my firsat day at a brand new school" it seemed a bit lazy, you just restated the sentence in a different form, as aforemwntioned and you could have been a bit more creative. And, creativity in this poem is there, but not at its full potential. I like how you said 9th grade was a momentous event in your life, and I can understand why, its great that you write abpout things that matter to you. This is only constructive criticism, and I know you have the potential to embed more creativity and eccentricity in your writing. You can discard my opinion, if you wish. Great job, few trhings needed to be worked on (as aforementioned) and I'm glad I was able to read this because I took a nostalgia trip in my memories. (Sorry for this novel, I tend to leave lengthy comments to fully analyze things, and collect all ofmy thoughts on something.)  

It is one if the best ways to recount a moment in history..... Its rhythm is good, and the story is well put together... Keep writing!