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The Dew Drops In The Morning

February 24, 2014
By Blackswan24420 BRONZE, Monticello, Arkansas
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you cant control the situations that come up, but you can control how you react to them

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The dew drops in the morning can't compare to your beauty
When I wake up you're the first thing thats on my mind
I can watch you all day like my favorite movie
Your personality is so gentle and kind


You're my rib, my spine, my backbone
Youre an inspiration to everyone you come in contact with
Together we have grown-
I want to spend today, tomorrow, and the next day with you

The vibrant rays of sunlight can’t compare to your elegance
The sweet smell of fresh picked roses is your fragrance...

© Delia R.,Phoenix, AZ

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Blackswan24420 BRONZE said...
on May. 6 2014 at 11:08 am
Blackswan24420 BRONZE, Monticello, Arkansas
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you cant control the situations that come up, but you can control how you react to them

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Thanks for the advice ill use it 
chrisvfree PLATINUM said...
on May. 6 2014 at 10:04 am
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
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I pretty much try to stay in a constant state of confusion just because of the expression it leaves on my face. - Johnny Depp

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This is a very beautiful and emotional piece, perhaps to develop it further make more concious breaks between the lines, if that makes any sense. But nice flow!