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Sin of Love

December 28, 2011
By Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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This isn't how we expected to be
To be lost with no way
When you lose love you see
There's nothing left to say

Life stops with it walk
The second our love clock stops
For we shall no longer talk
As my tears roll on the top

I lost my heart to you
Never dreamed it to happen
Wished this was never true
Now our love seems like a sin

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Crazymexican GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 11:22 am
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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Yea to me I don't really register my own work until someone reviews it so that is my fault
recurring_resilience SILVER said...
on Jan. 20 2012 at 5:16 pm
recurring_resilience SILVER, Ashburn, Virginia
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&quot;These are the times that try men&#039;s souls.&quot; - Thomas Paine.<br /> <br /> &quot;You don&#039;t understand! I coulda had class. I coulda been a contender. I could&#039;ve been somebody, instead of a bum, which is what I am.&quot; - On the Water Front<br /> <br /> &quot;This is my place of failure.&quot;

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I liked the first stanza.. But after that the rhymes sort of came across as forced and then didn't rhyme at all.. I had trouble making sense of the piece too..