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December 12, 2011
By Chchchloe SILVER, Rockwall, Texas
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Raging storms drench over my broken heart
The clouds of hate begin to rule my soul
Been told emotions were wrong from the start
Don’t speak; ladies know their place, know their role

Society's taught me to hate myself
They've taken from me everlasting hope
They've put me on an unreachable shelf
I am falling down this slippery slope

But I won't let them overpower me
I promise, Geoff, I'll be the difference
The feelings I've felt seem to be the key
As sadness leads to the path to patience

For one must find pain to understand love
Once that's known, acceptance will rise above

© Anna Y., Hernando, MS

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Karles_Ivy PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 11:19 am
Karles_Ivy PLATINUM, Sunnyside, Washington
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Sometimes the bully isn’t the captain of the cheerleaders or the girl who for some reason has it out for only you; sometimes the worst bully of them all is you.- Karles_Ivy

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This is truly exceptional.! I love how it talks about overcoming the prejudicy of society and how you make use of descriptive words.! This is really amazing.! Keep writing.!
SwagGuy101 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:05 am
SwagGuy101 BRONZE, Millington, Tennessee
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I like this, its easy to relate to