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Glorious Melody of the Beast

November 22, 2011
By CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
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CaptainStar BRONZE, Estancia, New Mexico
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In the quietness of the cold, still night, the beast that is Guardian to many, As it prowls to it's same to sing ab-right. Shaking an ebony mane, pleasing any. The audience that a'shines through darkness, the sense of chill and pleasure floats around. As the cries of the beast rejects greiveness. Twelve times does this event occur on ground and as the rest of the choir arrived, Then the musical of the plain began. Critters came to see the a'dancing flame, That emanated around the orb's span. Haunting the sound may be to various To one a melody that's glorious.

© Jessica R., Phoenix, AZ

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This was originally a project for my English class and I wanted to share it.
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Shahiro PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 2 2012 at 7:34 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
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Nice! i like your word usage and the way you organized the words in your sentences.... please check out my work........ thanks!! =D
WhiteStorme BRONZE said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 12:16 am
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Really good work. I wish people still wrote like "a'shines". It's lost with the young crowd. Nice job
Sabee said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 6:14 am
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wow!! excellent poem...love it
sabeeii said...
on Feb. 26 2012 at 6:07 am
excellent poem..love it
satellite23 GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 2:01 pm
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Nice descriptions
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Excellent work! I'm sorry, but I don't really know about proper sonnet format, so I can't give you a full critique. As far as I can see, this is perfect! Keep writing!
kiLLaBLoke3 GOLD said...
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Beautiful lines... I like it!!
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
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This is really really good
Pepper243 said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 7:12 pm
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AMAZING!!!