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Emotionally insane

March 3, 2010
By Anonymous

Black clothed girl, I can see through your soul,
Starring into your Heart I can see all of the holes,
From some you may try to hide it, but I Know,
You’re Emotional and Physical Scars do Show.

Making yourself Bleed, Trying to Release the pain,
Feels kind of good when you’re cutting close to your veins,
You’re emotionally INSANE.

You need help, but that you just don’t want,
You secretly Yearn for it, Come on let’s just be up Front.

Happiness came, and then it quickly left,
I think it took the rest of your Soul too,
You should call and report a theft...
Because you’re left here with the pain, cutting closer to your veins,
Stranded all alone... Emotionally INSANE.

When are you going to Stop?
-When there’s no more blood left to Bleed.

Are you going to Kill Yourself?
-Yes, Those are my intentions ... Indeed.

You NEED help, but you don’t want it, secretly you crave it,
I want to help find your Soul, and then I want to save it,
I must Act Fast don’t know how long you’re going to last...
With this pain, As You Cut through your veins....







Emotionally INSANE.



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on Oct. 21 2010 at 10:15 am
Dessometrics BRONZE, Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
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beautifully written

Hoodie BRONZE said...
on Mar. 31 2010 at 6:08 pm
Hoodie BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"Small minds think people, average minds think events, but great minds, like mine, think ideas"-unknown

fml.says.it.all is right. its not okay or cool if this is about you. but i love the poem.

on Mar. 29 2010 at 10:04 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Don&#039;t gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold.&quot; <br /> <br /> &quot;You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer.&quot;

i read this a while ago and i really enjoyed it. but i enjoyed it even more this time :) it's very deep. and it's sad but a lot of people are just like this! you did a great job describing everything. the poem had really nice rhythm too :) i really really like this...5 stars :) would you mind commenting on some of my work?

Lori`Acee GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 11:16 am
Lori`Acee GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is only what u make it

Well, thanks.

Lori`Acee GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2010 at 11:15 am
Lori`Acee GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is only what u make it

Well thanks for ur opinion, but maybe its not like that for YOU, this is based on a true story.

Buddyboo said...
on Mar. 16 2010 at 3:55 pm
Buddyboo, Callaway, Virginia
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I thought it was OK, but I mean, coming from someone who knows cutting personally, it's nothing like what you made it up to be....

on Mar. 16 2010 at 11:23 am
fml.says.it.all SILVER, Spring Lake Park, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Excuses are like BUTT HOLES, they stink and everyone has one.&quot; ~Mr.Bogle (my math teacher)

I think she meant "all over" by like It didn't like all work together in the order it was in. I thought it did and loved it. What I don't love about it is if the poem is about you.

Lori`Acee GOLD said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 4:18 pm
Lori`Acee GOLD, Washington, District Of Columbia
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Favorite Quote:
Life is only what u make it

thanks, may i ask what exactly do you mean by "all over" ?

Chelz PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 9 2010 at 12:56 pm
Chelz PLATINUM, Iron Mountain, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;When life gives you lemons, bite into it and embrace the bitter taste of reality.&quot; (My own words)

I like it but it was a little all over but it still made since